Atoms bouncing back and forth amid the ether,
Elemental bits of all earth’s matter,
Attract, repel, and sometimes come together
With a bond that’s hard to shake or shatter
Unless a rival element appears
To peel off half a once-strong compound.
Chemical specifics would bore you to tears,
But it’s these elective affinities by which we’re all bound.
From the Baron, impassioned and rash,
To his lovely wife, long-suffering and wise,
And little Ottilie, dazzled by the flash
Of love and chemistry; not so the Captain’s eyes.
The lesson for this once-happy group is not fun
But some chemical reactions can never be undone.


Wonderful! Captures the mood of the book so well. Looking forward to your full post. My post may be a little delayed while I am travelling. I’ve got the last ten pages to read.
Thank you! It is what I was going for. Take your time; I’ve got all week, and besides, it’s a bit of a miracle I’m not late myself.